I hear singing
a bird has been released
droplets of freedom spin from her wings
she is ruffled and puffed
a little fisherman
longing to dive
embraced by ripples
with fish on her mind
Feb
5
2013
silverpoetry
all that glitters is not gold
This is wonderful. Great images and paced just right. Dave
Thanks! x
You have been to PP&P enough to know that this would fit very nicely with what we try to do there.
Just sayin’…
I ACTUALLY thought about that just the other day!
I’ll check out your submission process ASAP xxx
Lovely poetry you’ve got here! “droplets of freedom”.
Nice poem indeed!
thankyou
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I have missed the poetry of the silver poet from “silverpoetry”. So glad she is back.
oh thank you kinds sir, i’m always around, in the ether waiting for a yes from the universe and then VoilA!
The words of the poem mimic the movement of the dancer so well.
Waoooooh … Just so tastefully elegant in a class by itself … Thanks for sharing …
Thanks for reading, and your compliment is a tasty silver fish xx
Smiling … I appreciate your postings always … Thanks again …
I love the sound of “ruffled and puffed”!
i see the birds coming out of the water and shaking the droplets from their feathers and also proud of their catch at the same time
xx
Love this so much! I can just picture her graceful movements. Beautiful!!
ahh she’s a dancer alright xx
being one moved by the passion i find in life, this phrase particularly caught my attention and it appears to be the pulse, the heart of the poem: “a little fisherman
longing to dive…” longing is desire, passion. thank you silverpoet :~)
you are welcome, and it IS the pulse… its all he thinks about …. and because he’s thought it he WILL
well thought-out response… full of impact and suggesting that action proceeds intensive thought, concentrated focus and visioning. yes! thank you silver poet
superb!
love xxxx
wheres you poetry gone?
i can’t find your link anymore
delicious x
oh they were… those silvery fish
This is good it has a nice rhythm.
thankyou, its a naive flow, that I allowed …i really didn’t doctor the poem at all its the first draft xxx
You are a reader of fisherbirds’ thoughts…
its a little known talent
Thanks .. The Silver Poet …
thankYOU
Very nice
thanks xx
This may be one of my favorites from you. A little slice of everyday doctored up to be all sparkly and gorgeous. Superb!
these are the best ones that just happen…I always loved playing doctor…so it all makes sense! I love the way you put things x
So beautiful!
Thankyou