he saw my fear
and he called me wonderful
he touched my scar
and he called me brave
When I fall
out of the tree
I might land on a patch of moss.
There could be a mossy patch
could be
a soft
spot,
some warm grass the sun was sitting on
a mossy patch
a soft bit
a piece of sun
wonderful.
nice and soft in feeling as well…:)
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it was soft moment, realising that I’d found a safe place at last
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this, i shall share with a great friend…
for she will know why…
scars are but a thin surface…and, yes…
a testimony of the Bravery which is a part of the Beauty of Her…
your poem is wonderful, Silver Poet…
Peace to you.
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I am honoured and thrilled that you see the love and hope in my poetry, joy to you and your friend 🙂
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Simple, beautiful, and quite nostalgic. I love it!
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You are spot on! the nostalgic energy is strong in this one x
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This *is* a wonderful remembrance–and I love the painting accompanying it!
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thank you very much! I write and paint for wonderful people like you!
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You are wonderful ~ I felt everything ~
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You are brilliant with painting a moment with words 🙂
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thank you for subscribing to my blog. I love this poem. ‘Wonderful’ also describes the poem itself and the wonderful metaphor of moss. In fact it’s so good I’m going to read it again 🙂
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HAha! thanks heaps xx
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in fact I loved it so much I’ve copied it into my notebook along with poems by Billy Collins and Charles Simic. you can’t get much better company than that 🙂
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oh WOW! well now my ego is dragging me over to bookmark your page!
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just realises your an Aussie (me too)! don’t meet too many of us on the net… x
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then we must stick together 🙂 I’m from Adelaide ; where are you?
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up in Murwillumbah, Northern Rivers NSW….nice and peaceful right at this moment….in the green forest.
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I like this…. a lot. You are very prolific which is a beautiful thing and something you must find great comfort in. Margie
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i do. thankyou for commenting and liking xx
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