Sometimes you disappear
did you know?
like a dove
my magician’s friend.
I wonder then,
my heart shapeshifts,
a sniffer dog it searches
sniffing
for you.
I know nothing
But what I see here,
in my kennel of supposition and assumption.
Where are you pretty friend?
Where is my heart’s compliment?
Could you be,
drinking teas from China?
Eating chocolate pieces?
Underneath the tree with
God
tasting
paradise?
Will you re-appear
like a bunny,
and leave me a symbol
of life’s
miraculous?
YES
In your feathers
and mesmerising sequins
I feel you
deftly leaving
a brush-mark intangible.
Very lyrical and imaginative. Thank you again for liking my poetry as well. Best wishes,
Michael
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easy to like that which is interesting and evocative!
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certainly evokes magic!
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oooh good! thanks
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Grand! I could see it all in my mind and the shivers at a magic show! Thank you ~Deborah
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how exciting! glad to be part of your shivering!
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Happy National Poetry Month!
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thanks!
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God tasting paradise!!! YOU ARE SO deliciously good!
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‘stttrrlurpp’ that is the slurp of delicious!
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good work 🙂
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thanks 😉
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There’s magic in these lines. It’s quite lovely.
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love that you can feel it
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‘Tea and oranges, all the way from China’……….magic poetry….(how do you write?)
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Beautiful images, once again!
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Wonderful writing… you brought to magic to the page 🙂
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Very nice.
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xx
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Very well written. Thanks for sharing! I have a minor obsession with reading/writing about magicians. 🙂
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I can understand that it is a thrilling concept!
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Oooh, that’s lovely – bravo!
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ahh thank you for reading xx
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amazing playfulness loved it. 🙂
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thankyou, it is playful and sort of teasing….about a friend of mine that simply disappears from time to time
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ha! i used to have a friend like that. then i lost the password of the only email account he knew. even though i have given him my blog addresses but he simply vanished. 🙂
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u never know he may pop up again like the proverbial rabbit!
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chances are very slim 🙂
its been more than two years now.
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oh well, magic is what magic does!
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agreed 🙂
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Reblogged this on window to my soul.
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Hiya…just like Mari’s comment… God tasting paradise….brilliant! Thank you for sharing it! 🙂
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thanks special guy!
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Alter ego or lost companion– matches up well with the special picture…
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definitely a part of the self that supports my existence in some way … xx
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the silver poet’s silver tongue has not lost its shimmering silver soul
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oh you are the one with the silver tongue!
the soul DOES shimmer though, to the touch…
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magical words you spin Silver Poet. . . thank you and I appreciate your visit earlier. Abundant blessings to you! 🙂
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thankyou, i feel warmer having read your comment xx
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🙂
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Love the metaphor!
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thanks, love that you love!
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a light-hearted and flirtatious poem
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thank you yes xxx
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Love it! I might have fiddledwith it more but you nailed it. Where you at?
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i probably will fiddle with it more….everytime i read a poem i write i change it….sometimes i just have to STOP you know 😉
in australia what about you?
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In Wales but often in NZ and Perth where have family and friends. Yes, its difficult to stop tweaking a work and just stop! I didn’t mean to imply any criticism of your work, just that different minds see different patterns in the same thing. I remind myself that japanese garden artists often put a small imperfection in so they will not make a big one (karma or something).
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I would love to visit Wales one day. No criticism detected, I naturally imbue my work with little imperfections! xx
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Awww…lovely!
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Thankyou angel x
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