Fill me Fill me
Empty
I am
But a vessel
Fill me
.
Leave me to my filling
.
Fix me fix me
cracked
I am
seeking
.
Sea king
Of vessels
Fix me
.
I am space
I am
a vessel
Fill me fill me
I am
near full
tear full
I filter (r ified)
Filling now
.
Water
I
am
Letting in letting out
let in (g)
o
to let
Small space in
water
.
I am space within water
.
Open me open me
Split
me
open
Go o d (d) god
but a vessel
a leaking vessel
.
Sink down down
Drowning
I am
Struggling
to (sur) face
to (sur) render
.
adam atom adam atom
splitting adams
surrender
to render
me
I am whole hole hollow
I am
but a vessel
Nice poetry.
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thank you very much
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wow! This poem has a lot going on with such few words. Very intriguing.
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thanks…i am not sure it is finished yet….
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I like the emptiness.
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thats the best bit
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Orange creme delirious. Great as usual..
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thanks i love the smell of orange creme!
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So talented! You’ve made me want to write a poem today!
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YES YES!!!!!
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i mean YES to writing a poem! a little yes to the talented comment haha must be receptive to compliments!
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I love the phrase “I am whole hole hollow” and I really love your vessel! Jane
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thanks jane…i love words x
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I thought this was inspiring and as empty vessels we can only ask the Universe to fill us.
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thankyou so much, i agree that is all we can ask…but what a plethora of life the universe has to offer!
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so true
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This is amazing. I love the way it plays with words and ideas. Its both clever and heartfelt, and that’s an exquisite combination!
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Thankyou! I have so much FUN with words and the idea i had behind that poem still intrigues me…splitting adams…splitting atoms….. woo
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Ingenious! LOVE your skills!
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thanks! love that you love xx
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So beautiful and I love the feeling of longing. Wow!!!!
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yes it is FULL of longing this one xx
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Hello Friends and Fellow-bloggers,
For the past month a group of you have been extending your friendship hand by reading my posts and sharing your thoughts, nominating me for the VBA & THE LINK TO LINK AWARD, INSPIRATIONAL AWARD, COMMENTATOR AND SUNSHINE AWARDS, each a tribute and beautiful sweet honors gratuitously sent my way. Each are wholeheartedly accepted and acknowledged in this post despite my inability to post each photo of each of these marvelous awards.
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JEEZ … you are incredible. 😀
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incredible is the one who gets it!
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;D
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I love the words, and the format of this. The flow is amazing. We are all just vessels…
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thankyou x we are we are!
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This is fabulous! OMG! Why hadn’t I read this???
Splitting Adams indeed. 😉
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big SMILES! xxxxxxxx
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