Chest frosted over
claiming winter stories
.
Unfolding flakes of pretty ice
clutch fragile hands
.
a formidable posing
but seasons shift
.
Spring penetrates,
proposing adventure
.
Stirring pots of colour
array with toffee possibilities
.
Let sun dust your chest,
sweeping ancient glaciers
to slide
a river of clean delight.
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thank you very much!
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Wonderful work,a favourite for me
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Why Thankyou x
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This made me smile SOOOOO much, it’s so beautiful. I loved it, thanks for sharing your beautiful mind yet again.
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Oh Lady Day My own morning smile has been activated!
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Love love love your writing…sweeping ancient glaciers to slide a river of pure delight….shivers:)))
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i was imagining how the sun bursts over the mountain peak and then travels quite quickly over the ice…hmmm thank you, sweet heart
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this is so full of hope and beauty š
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thankyou, it is a poem about the hope for positive change…personally i think we have a new opportunity every morning, every month, every season….every breath
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Let the sun dust your chest – perfect.
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xxx
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like something sweet
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So good. Thank you.
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xxxx
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WONDERFUL WONDERFUL WONDERFUL ~THANK you friend ~Deborah
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oh so welcome, lovely compliment x
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Mmmmm…a ‘river of clean delight’ – I am a fellow lover of all things spring! You have captured its essence in words.
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thankyou, i also dearly love the newness of springtime x
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Change can be seen with Fear from some…
yet…
on the other side of the wall could be some thing wonderful.
i love this and thank you…Peace
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thankyou Greg x
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Very nice! I really enjoyed this one. š
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thankyou, i appreciate your enjoyment!
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Lovely wordplay, interesting imagery!
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thankyou x
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A river of clean delight!
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ha oh thankyou!
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it’s so full… and overflowing with meaning and beauty. I smiled more and more as i read it… felt my own heartbeat.. like your writing enlightens me. I love it
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Oh I am HONOURED that you read, FELT AND commented xxxx
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Truly wonderful images, that takes us beyond here. Thank you for sharing.
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Thanks so much for reading, it makes my day to know that other’s enjoy my thoughts x
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