Lake eyed,
seeking sophisticated lines
in experience only thisbig
.
Bonsai finger, reaching,
one, two, three
un, deux, ,trois
A
B
C
Flaring
YES
FLASH
Concept
IGNITION!
.
The mother
heated, pressing, liquidity
tidal
primal
OH to tend not bind
OH to guide not dam
OH to love not bury
.
Sidestepping
yielding
to
big spirit remembering
All That Glitters Is Not Gold
it is all just bullshit anyway.....
Your Brain is a Radio that Does What its Told
Haikus Senryus and Tankas about anything and everything
Poetry
musings on life | bits of psychology | attempts at poetry
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Scripting the desires that are soul deep
The Poetry Monarch.
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Darkness, delusion, smeared with a stick of butter and laughter. Words collide, they bring forth death!
Pain goes in, love comes out.
well, come on in. bite. chew. spit.
He started Writing, The paper started speaking...
Once lost
Silver Poetry 
“Lake eyed.” That’s a wonderful image.
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thank you very much !
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Thankyou Jeremy, I love when people see my words x
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You are welcome.
I do too. And like I said, that is a lovely image and a great way to “launch” the poem. I enjoyed it. 🙂
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I liked this and especially “Oh to love not bury.” The art was also good
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Thanks, passionate prayer really, art is just a doodle 🙂
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Maybe too personal to ask…do you have chilldren, is this your babe?
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I have eight children. Nothing is too personal for me really 🙂 i have recently experimented using the newspaper to doodle some life drawing images onto x
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ah…this is why you capture this experience so well…lovely Silver. To tend not bind to guide not dam to love not bury…always, always.Love that. It’s what I hope to always be for mine too.
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yes…they tug so hard, sometimes it is like they WANT you to bind them and you have to fight the urge …ha i do anyway
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Tidal….primal. Love it!
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thanks G x
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OH…OH…OH yes, that is It!:) Great poem!
-Jennifer
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OH I am SO SO SO happy that you like it x
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you’re writing is simply amazing…seriously
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Thanks David, now to convince the publishers…. 🙂
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I enjoyed the shape of your poem! THANK you ~Deborah
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thanks, you make me go back to look at its shape!
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This applies to writing, reading, child-rearing….to life.
Reminded me of my poem a href=”http://dpbowman.wordpress.com/2012/05/09/ume-matsu-sakura/”> Ume, Matsu, Sakura where I tried to capture the same feeling.
Well done. ~Blessings, Dan
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cool Dan! it really does apply to almost everything…if not everything, Thanks x
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i enjoy your work very much – i’ve nominated you for the versatile blogger award – Cheers!
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thankyou x
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oooooo, lovely romantic imagery and language! thank you for liking my post. as i’m a dancer, i just made up a shimmery little dance phrase in response to your work. blessings
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WONDERFUL! xxx
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