i am
diminutive,
a bumble bee like
flutter bird,
i am a nectar rainbow
ambrosia and light
so
withhold your strident word
and cursing fear,
put down you bricks and mortar,
and soften to me,
for i am joy,
pink butter joy,
a honey breeze
a tickle,
i am smiles of jasmine flavour
i hover and glide
within your sigh
an iridescent whisper,
i am your sun kissed friend,
you will find me in a flower
can I even say how awesome this is? splendid, amazing, effervescent (that last is the word of my week) lol it’s soooo gorgeous.~R
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aha I think u are a hummingbird deep down to identify so… a gorgeous joyous creature xxx
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oh lol I wish…I am just having a fleeting time…just love so much to rhyme…but so beautiful I’m not…just love the words that you’ve got…:) lol
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well beauty is in the eye of the beholder do not forget !!
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this is true, just would love to be painted as beautifully as a bird…just human, no feathers
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I think i will write two poems soon…..one is about ‘eyes’
and another will be about ‘wishes’
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I will eagerly await your spellbinding words…perhaps we should each write on them and meet up here and see our own takes on these things 🙂
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ok, sounds good give me a day or so!
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no prob…this will be fun:)
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feathers are soooo fun, sometimes when i put one in my hair it distracts from my grumpy face or poor self image! I get teased about it by well meaning friends, mostly those who see the bird in me so it is acceptable! xx
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Beautiful writing. 😉
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Oh thank you for your compliment 🙂
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You are welcomed. 🙂
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‘…a honey breeze tickle…’ Love that part.
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thanks 😉
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I really value your sensitivity towards animals.
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it is sort of selfish love, i love them but maybe it is because i can find aspects of myself there
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Delicately beautiful words – and painting!
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thanks sweet heart you
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Reblogged this on The ObamaCrat.Com™ and commented:
I love this poem, thank you “silverpoetry”.
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you are lovely thanks x
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There is much positive response to your immense talent. Thank you.
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Very nice to be those things! k.
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yes, i am imagining….the humming bird might actually be laughing his little bum off at my miss take on his character!
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Beautiful – love it!
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love that you love!
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What beautiful, delicate writing! I really love this 🙂
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why thank you, your receptivity is appreciated xx
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Beautiful 🙂 piece thank you for liking this post https://thewritingcorpofficial.wordpress.com/2012/05/25/writing-your-first-novel/
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u r welcome! and thanks for your compliment x
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very wise one, but not everyone can have that large heart, so… better be careful 🙂
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a large open heart is the very best anyone can hope for…i wish it for me…i wish it ……..
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lovely!
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thanks 🙂
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Gorgeous poem and image!
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Just so happy you read it x bonus that you liked it!
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A gentle flow, matching the tone.
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t h a n k s x x x
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Dreamy imagery, soft words, fantasy on wings of bumblebee; peaceful poetry…
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there is a peace to it I do agree, i could feel it as I wrote it….a soft feeling xxx thanks
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This was a great read. I just had this vision of this person with all your wonderful details and it was so free-spirited and erotic and so forth. My favourite line: Pink butter joy…
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well that is rewarding- what a sweet mind you must have to be able to envision such a wonderful being x
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aww thanks 🙂
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I love this! “i am a nectar rainbow” is so perfect. And the painting–exquisite!
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Thanks J, love seeing you here!
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I do notice you haven’t been adding to your site?? have you another one up your sleeve?
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No, just occupied with poetry in other venues. Thanks for asking–I plan to update soon with lots of good news!
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goodie, cannot wait!
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Very beautiful blog ,I like it .
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Thankyou, I like yours too x
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Oh I love this one! I think it is my favourite so far 🙂
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Thankyou so much, it is one of my favourites too!
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