In this world of gridlock
and perilous edges,
I
move
from infant towing ducks
and
l i n e s
to
here
and still the steady growth of skin in which to fit soul and all.
I wish to curl,
fingers in fingers,
but bear feet stretch and dig,
fists are balled and hoping.
Blood sticks
to my toes,
occasional sadness expands
and
leaves
the body,
downstream
via silver boats…..
…..
…………
…………..
…………..
..
But the lines are very dark
and whales are needed to tow them now,
because even on my bravest days
I cannot.
You ever so marvelous. Lined lined line – I feel so lined. .
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cannot tow those lines…sometimes i am towing towing away and i realise and go URGHHHH !
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Reblogged this on Peace the consciousness, the transitoriness, your existence. and commented:
Superb!
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Wow this is impressive! Love it! Your art is getting better and better. It has been such a privilege to watch your work evolve! Keep it up!
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p.s.
hope you don’t mind but I shared this on my FB! I just love this! “But the lines are very dark and whales are needed to tow them now…” Just lovely!
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OH Glad for the love and the appreciation and the sharing! coolio!!
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ahh it is a trick really, some of my work has come from the vaults, in fact most has…I just have great favourites and little sketches and over worked and underworked art a bit of everything really, its not art really just more marks! but thanks for your keen eye x
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Absolutely admire the way you’ve crafted this poem. Brilliant.
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Thanks, beautiful Gravatar image btw xx
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Thank you !
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Great piece of art; and poignantly powerful words to describe it. Felt some deep sadness in me when reading this. well done.
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i think you are a perceptive and darling soul xxx
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Reblogged this on The ObamaCrat.Com™ and commented:
“silverpoetry’ has a gift.
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oh thank you so…I think you are heading for a little spot on my silver cat page… it is like a tiny award but without the hullabaloo!
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My reward is being able to read & share your immense talent. You are truly a poetess with a heart of gold. I admire your cause for the children. Enjoy your weekend.
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Thankyou, for noticing The I AM Program, that has made my day 🙂
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You truly are a magical writer…it’s so easy to be lost in your dreamworld
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you will never be lost….just follow the whales and hummingbirds they will sing your way home
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Hi Silver! Thanks so much for passing by my blog, Blood Petals, for the like and for choosing to follow my posts.
I look most forward to delving in to your blog 🙂
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thank YOU and may warm gentle love enter your day
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Ahhh. How truthful. I cannot get over how well you paint with your words. You and I both need a giant pod of orcas to pull us. Love it. Yet again.
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Thank you my lady x
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here is my ‘wishes’ post…hope you like it; http://rlbk75.wordpress.com/2012/05/26/poison-versus-life/
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oh you work fast! I will save the link and add it to mine when done…now to check it out
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need a love button for this … words & visual … wow
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oh thats beautiful…i want a love button! maybe there is a way to make that happen….Dear Word Press…..
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Wow, you always move everything with your words.
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in a way i am attempting to move the feeling out of my body onto the page…so that makes sense xxx
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I really like this one. I enjoy your writing style..
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Thanks darling, I get a kick out of sharing x
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Deep thoughts~Sincerely Deborah
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yes they are, thank you, Deborah
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This is awesome. And again, I love the illustration.
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