as night concludes my body rolls
to rest on printed sand
.
I am phosphorus
.
sliding through hot sea walls
I am wide water falling
I am gold flesh rain
.
moon waves are tinted love and form to flex this raw satin surface
.
somewhere a child whistles sweetly,
her pea green boat patiently bobbing
.
she of sky cat dreams holds out her bowl
colours slip,
aromatic oils flower,
I dip my fingers and take the hint
.
there is lightning in my eyes
and there is lightning in your words as well….wonderful
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lightning is so poetry producing…electrical information!
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I love just living here in your words..dreamy surreal vibrant…all the above…like a decadent painting…I LOVE the art gallery you create every time. Thank you.
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my gallery is open 24 hours a day for beautiful perusers and contemporaries such as yourself xxx
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Beautiful!
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thanks xxx
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mmmmm…. this one is succulent…. love x
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isn’t succulent a delicious word! thankyou xx
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Lovely!!!
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positively, throat-chokingly gorgeous.
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you are poetry too x
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I dip my fingers and take the hint Beautiful accent to this poem.
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thank you very much, i imagined the coloured oil dangling in droplets from my fingers….
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this absolutely breathtaking and the ending i wasn’t expecting, i love that ending. i’ve got thoughts on it, because i like to try and figure it out, but i’ll wait on it.
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awesome, I’d love to know x
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lines 3 – 6 are yummy
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i love that you noticed xx
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“she of sky cat dreams holds out her bowl”
I wish I had written this line.
You must be a magician.
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thankyou, but the magic is yours xxx
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Wow, this is just super!
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I am happy to nominate you for the Tell Me About Yourself Award – for rules on acceptance kindly go to http://readinpleasure.wordpress.com
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Thanks xxx, I appreciate your appreciation
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Thanks! super is one of my favourite words!
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Purified sentiments! ~Deborah
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x Thanks so much Deborah, I DO appreciate your comments
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Wonderful poem! Well done! 🙂
And hey, I nominate you for Tell Me About Yourself Award. Details are here: http://subhanzein.wordpress.com/2012/05/30/awards-galore-3-0/.
Hope you like it. And congratulations! 🙂
Subhan Zein
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Thanks Sweetheart xx
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I love your style… and this poem is abbsolutely beautiful!
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absolutely*
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i just thought you were exaggerating the abbbbbsolutely because you liked it soooo much! 🙂
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hahahahaha perhaps…
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Thanks! it did make me feel extra nice when I wrote it xx
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you’re a beautiful writer.
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Thankyou, humbling words x
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if words are images that are hidden under letters, you know how to pull them out to life. It must come from your painting, then again it doesn’t matter, the result is still mesmerizing.
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I am touched, it makes me feel so good to know that you can see them (the words) with the same sensitivity as I do when I write them. Thankyou for your compliment too 🙂
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I really love your line, ‘I am phosphorus’, I don’t know why exactly, especially since I was horrible at chemistry. But what I do remember was that Phosphorus glows white when exposed to oxygen, and as horribly nerdy as that sounds I couldn’t help but draw a connection between that and to the moon (because of the title) which also glows white… then I also remembered that phosphorus means something phosphorescent, so my whole nerd moment was really unnecessary but I thought it was a kind of cool scientific connection even if it wasn’t what you meant and I decided to share. So anyways, I really love that line!
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thankyou and it is a cool scientific connection…i hadn’t yet discovered! thats why i love to share because i know there is a lot to the words that even i can’t see, it is treasure to be a part of this poetic universe! xxx
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