I love you
ALL
you green hide sea monsters!
deep diving, angel swimmers!
swift, shallow
water bug skimmers!
my adoration!
my kisses are….
a smacking hallelujah!
You write or draw
with passion,
nerve deep
your feet are hurting
wanting to kick!
i see screaming and sighs
scrabbling to touch,
sometimes I throw down the page in disgust!
but i love you so much from the blood inside me
you magical beings, you sharp, angry beasts
alive and or dead you
are birthing your self
you….
my conscious despair
in a world made of hell.
oh thank you for sharing
the bits I don’t say
your guts
and your glitter
fatten my day.
Silver Poetry 
Thanks, I felt that.
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cool! i meant it!
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Nice!
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Thankyou x
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your guts and your glitter fatten my day…very nicely written.
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thankyou, they do x
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I enjoyed this poem with a HUGE GRIN on my face. It was delicious 🙂 Thanks!
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hey YOU are welcome wonderful expresser!
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Very nice.. Much enjoyed this!!
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YOU are nice, thanks for reading xxx
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This is a fantastic piece of work…one of my favourites, if not my favourite of yours. So amazing!
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well thankYOU!! I like it too actually, will probably work on it a little more…but will perform it in a couple of weeks to a crowd of artists!
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Oh how exciting…it is an artists piece on artists…they will love it!
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the ego is a fine and feathered friend of the artist… i am sort of expecting someone to go… I AM NOT SHALLOW! or ‘which of MY pages did you throw down in disgust?… lol its all about me anyway!
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‘Someone’ quite specifically?…I think it is interesting..art…about me, about you, about them, inspired, talking to you, not talking to you, no you’re not my muse, yes you are my muse…lol. Blah Blah…very complicated human interaction this art stuff…This was lovely! If someone walks away…they were never really a true artist, to see through the odd harsh lines.
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not specific….. oh i don’t mind 😉 humans do seem to complicate relationships….maybe if we simplified it all understood ourselves better our relationships would flow with more ease and grace!
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This is really sweet. To be full with love.
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definitely a great feeling! x
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I love this! I love “My kisses are …. / a smacking hallelujah!” –and, of course, the day-fattening “guts” and “glitter” : -)
And such wonderful rhythms throughout!
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yes haha sort of rhyming! 🙂 , i did truly enjoy the flow of creating this little one! thank you xx
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Bomba…friend…a whopping boombittyoooooow!!!!!!!
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hahahahaHA! thankYOU xxxxxxxx
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hallelujah – you are it!
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you are! thanks x ox ox o love kisses hugs squeezes YOU
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!!!!!!!!!!! really wonderful…your guts and glitter do fatten my day:))
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you are really wonderful! you are an angel diver
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I felt it too/ back at ya (OK maybe I can’t do unbridled enthusiastic love but) I think Yr. a darlin riding the right wave/ Thanx
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i don’t mind enthusiasm in all it’s firms bridled…unbridled… xxx
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Powerfully evocative.
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Thankyou, I hope so because i will be reading it at a thing next month!
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Whoa! Drew me in!~Blessings ~Deborah
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Good because I am talking to you and all the amazing people who express express and express from deep in their hearts xxx
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I love how the art comes alive here and gives the artist life (guts and glitter). I also like the sound of this, and I’m sure it will be wonderful when you read it aloud. It has a fun, spunky charm with the end rhymes and the conversational tone. Love it!
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Thankyou, I needed a little bit of encouragement about the performance…was tossing up about the choice of poem…but I think this one will work, so, enthused by your words I will go with it!
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