fluid blue
and velvet touch
this
skin
so small
I am a faerie
flit and purring
cat soft and quiet
in this intensity of space that intrigues and vibrates
a particle
a cell
an exhalation
breathe in
and
h a h h h h h h h h h
so small you can only imagine my smile
Published by The Silver Poet
I AM a little spark in the sea of conscious awareness.
I am passionate about bringing the concept of freedom of expression into the forefront of our one mind and a keen awareness of personal power to the hearts of little children everywhere.
I exist to express!
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Oh…that last line was just perfect!
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i do thankyou so much it surprised me too x
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That was a delight…Love how you use language, what it looks like, the shape of it. I think you need to upgrade to diamondpoet or something.
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You’re so lovely, I’ll stick with silver, gotta stay humble 😉
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I hear you.
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Breathing you in as I read. 🙂
Sometimes breaking it down to particle level makes the big things seem very small and petty in comparison. The irony there is not lost on me, nor is this poem.
Deep breaths.
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You are so perceptive, it’s true and I need to remember more often how small EVERYTHING really is…. xxxxx
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The frailty I feel in this words brings such a sense of lightness I delight in. This is beautiful.
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yes frailty YES so small and …insignificant … but it is in this realisation i find freedom and STRENGTH! xxxxxx you are beautiful
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🙂
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At first, I thought what is small. Unexpectedly, a cat. Interesting way to make me guess.
And thank you for liking my post “Crocodile Mouth”.
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well, maybe a cat… but really, much much smaller than that 😉 x
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Mouse?
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even smaller …..xxxx smaller than a kiss smaller something so small it cannot even be seen… a particle maybe… a particle of something MUCH BIGGER than anything we can imagine. I know it sounds crazy but really it is just a feeling. Lovely to meet you Yoshiko x
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Very interesting and meaningful.
Nice of you also, Silver Poet. ^_^
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There is always those deep breaths because of suffocation and then, the ease of a sigh enveloping all it encounters and is surrounded by~ tenderness! Gorgeous seamless lift!
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that is absolutely and exactly the way I feel x
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How SWEET this is! Delightful ‘capturing’ of a faerie, dear poet. Methinks you are one 🙂 ~hugs xo Gina
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YOU are xx Thankyou there are sooo many little faeries in this rainforest!
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Sweet, almost magical. 🙂
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ahhh there is magic there…in the bushes xx
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