What my 16 year old does when the internet is down SO PROUD!
Read it in RAP style….
I Would die for our world
I wouldnt die for ‘australia’
Would die for peace
I wouldn’t die for any ‘saviour’
Would die for a compassionate society
Would die for a world that’s violence free
Now That was a paradox …
Imagine
Not having to worry about buying new locks
If the guy walking in the store has a glock
Not having to need an organisation like doc’s
Respecting our people even if they wear crocs
Ahaha
A society to respect life and nurture.
Is what i seek.
Not neglect strife and torture.
Is what I plea
I just want to escape all of this and flee
We’re old enough. We’re evolved enough, we’re bold enough, We havent even solved enough yet to even begin this rat race, so why do we feel like we’re at an ending pace like we’re all fat running in last place, we should be all in the same predators chase, ready to pounce on unity of life as humankinds first prize taste
Not to lose resources on coming an individuals first it seems a waste
Like these people have some sort of blood thirst
To hurt to work to serve to curve ignorance into tolerance you like to Change ignorance to
Relevance. It’s not relevant plain and simple
Like your small tiny mind with views developed from miss cheneys nipple
You’re the bigoted scum that deserve to be crippled
Not the innocent souls that deserve love triple
Your views need to be sent back to any period before water could ripple
You fear us, so you fill us with fear.
Its a campaign just open your ears
The media isn’t a wise seer
The end is near the end is near
Not having to worry about buying new locks
If the guy walking in the store has a glock
Not having to need an organisation like doc’s
Respecting our people even if they wear crocs
Ahaha
A society to respect life and nurture.
Is what i seek.
Not neglect strife and torture.
Is what I plea
I just want to escape all of this and flee
We’re old enough. We’re evolved enough, we’re bold enough, We havent even solved enough yet to even begin this rat race, so why do we feel like we’re at an ending pace like we’re all fat running in last place, we should be all in the same predators chase, ready to pounce on unity of life as humankinds first prize taste
Not to lose resources on coming an individuals first it seems a waste
Like these people have some sort of blood thirst
To hurt to work to serve to curve ignorance into tolerance you like to Change ignorance to
Relevance. It’s not relevant plain and simple
Like your small tiny mind with views developed from miss cheneys nipple
You’re the bigoted scum that deserve to be crippled
Not the innocent souls that deserve love triple
Your views need to be sent back to any period before water could ripple
You fear us, so you fill us with fear.
Its a campaign just open your ears
The media isn’t a wise seer
The end is near the end is near
they’ll make SURE you buy more fear
Silver Poetry 
It would appear that artistic caring is inherited.
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He has my nose too! he’s a special one, far more evolved already than I am!
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More proof that my confidence in the younger generation is well founded. Bravo, Mama!
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Thankyou, I feel pretty strongly also that the kids these days are just getting better and better!
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Ah, so we have in common 16-year-olds! 🙂
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yes! thats what I thought when I visited your boy’s monkey house! cool isn’t it!
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haha, very.
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I like this..
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yes me too 🙂
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Crike, that’s excellent. Spoken word anger, 16 eh? Impressive. You should post an audible rap of this.
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I’m trying to get his sister to sing his songs…he might do it at some stage but he doesn’t think his voice is the right sound… he’s in a screamer band as the bass guitarist so he reckons he is a background artist HA that is not what I think!
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Reblogged this on The ObamaCrat.Com™ and commented:
This deserves to be shared and reblogged everywhere, especially to John McCain and Willard Mitt Romney. The NRA, and all warmongers everywhere.
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xxxx :-)))
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An activist already. Thank you for raising a thinking dissenter. We need a lot more of those.
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He is such a gem… on some level I want to protect him, but he’s so much happier being strong and just and speaking his beautiful mind! x
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Brilliant! It obviously runs in the family.
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I get all my talent from him!
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Wow, I could really hear that rapping in my head! What a clever lil guy. 🙂
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he’s pretty spesh, thanks for ‘listening’ 🙂
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Dear Max, Reading your work was an interesting experience. It felt like a big tree that you’d built as you climbed.
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I will pass on this message verbatim, (I agree completely with your analogy Claire)
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Well done Max ~ no wonder you’re proud 🙂
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🙂 🙂 very xx
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Max, i had more to say, as usual, but my server keeps giving me the boot, so we’ll see what happens. When a kid writes a poem, whether he’s a teenager or a kid -kid,9 times out of 10, adults will focus on his age, I think that’s the human way, We are not quite sure what we really remmember about being little, and we hope that we are learing enough grace to be old, But 16! Now, that’s a year – not because everyone gets big. Tons of boys do that at 17 and 18.
It’s this, I think, which you did very well: as the tree you climbed got bigger and bigger, the scope of your thinking also got bigger. It extended past the places
16-year-olds usually go. I felt that you were sort of retracing the origins of one paricular thread and it was exciting to see how far you could go under your own steam. There at the end, I got a sense (just a sense) of the man you are becoming,
Thanks for saring your work.
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Thanks – This will be copy and pasted in a message for him xx
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great piece and definitely coming from great stock !!
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THANKS! xx
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Beautiful!
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😉
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