take this acute experience
let it bite
let it sweep your starry walls
and penetrate your knowing,
feel the smart lift your brow,
and s t r e t c h your M O U T H
the choir has begun
…….limestone is cold and discerning…….touch it
this is an exceptional opportunity
stay keen and original
take the hit
make the jump
slide the tunnel
your skin
this is it
take
it
Your art is so intriguing.
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thankyou so much …art is a very special part of my life x
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quite the emotional immersion of oneness! BEAUTIFUL !
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thanks oneness is all there is really haha we are immersed even when we don’t know it..wooo 😉
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Yr work, both paintings & pertinent words are always satisfying/ Thanx again
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thankyou! xxx
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very nice. i’d be inclined to think that your inner walls being that of limestone is where we sharpen up life. like taking that knife with a little oil to sharpen it. one needs a little oil in life to lubricate that knife of life to keep it sharp. just a take. if you share thanksgiving there the same time as here, I hope you enjoyed it:)
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we don’t do a day for thanksgiving here …interesting….but it seems like a great day for you guys! I wasn’t sure what the limestone was in my poem but it had something to say so I let it!
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Very clever abstraction without being overwhelmingly vague, quite difficult, bravo
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Thankyou, cool comment, i had fun trying to work my own poem out here…so possibly a little more vague than I would have liked!
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