disappearing bones
of petal strength
and crushed colour
fitful pastel thought
shaping over walls
and the creeping sound
that moves you
and presses you,
slinging into you,
the very song you dream of purging….
and still
in ten thousand years
we are found
mouthing words that bind our seemingly free
delivering
the sweet opiate
we swallow with our eyes squeezed shut
in order to continue throwing rice
instead dive
why not,
past the
clenching,
and pull the teeth that grind those vows
let it happen,
be water on this hardened page
Poetic portrait. Well-sung voice.
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compliment delivered like a true musician FlutePlayer. I thank you x
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The words of you poem guide the eyes so well to aspects one might overlook…another excellent combination of artwork.
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Thankyou slpmartin š
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“Love is very compassionate” … It can make one feels like a drunkard … but … whatever comes out of a drunkard’s mouth is the truth from a sacred heart … Because … The treasure of love lies in our hearts … Love can make us see rainbow … in the middle of the afternoon without any rain … It can allow a young teenager to feel so committed without knowing what the future holds … Smiling … That is the reason … “Love is Blind” … And … We can only see the positive aspect of love … So … as to make our dreams come true … That is a fact of life …
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!!
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š …
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do you paint from models for these women in your set ?
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yes sometimes/mostly but sometimes they just spring from somewhere in my mind where they play all day in the sun
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that would be where they sojourned until you needed them
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yeah! sometimes they should sleep……
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I suppose it’s logical that the racy ones keep late hours š
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haha! thats great xx
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You poems are like Magic … Thanks for posting Silverpoetry …
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ThankYOU. I like magic. lovely compliment
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š … Honestly … You are always very touchy with your poems … Thanks … Silver Poet …
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love can be an awakening event for sure. but in a different direction that can be a tough thing to achieve based on past experiences – fears of something just not working out. on another note, sometimes vows take the fun out of it as I see it, especially where I see your part of “instead dive why not past the clenching” your next stanza pretty much confirms what i’m thinking of.
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š you are perspicacious
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I love the artistry of Silver Poetry
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Thankyou most appreciated, with purple petals
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( Ā° ĶŹ Ķ”Ā°)
ā„ ā āæ Namaste ā āæ ā„
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Talk about underlying messages… I love this.
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š thankyou. sometimes I have to dig so far to find the message I hide in my poetry!
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Powerful feelings.
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Thankyou xxx yes
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Almighty emotions !
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almighty alrighty!
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The creeping sound that moves you. Pressing, slinging, mouthing. You and your silver words.
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the truly silver are the ones that feel the words… my cat just sighed š Ive never heard a cat sigh before! that was weird… sounded like a person sighing!
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My cat huffs. Even his sighs have attitude.
I wish I was silver, but I am more powder blue. Bouncing blue light waves. š
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oh i LOVE bouncing blue waves… like surf or SNOW
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Wow! Such terrific, vivid images here! I love the striking toughness of “petal strength” (the power of beauty?), and the closing imperative to “be water on this hardened page” is very wise, very Zen, and more.
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ThankYOU š it is the power of beauty the dichotomous nature of things..
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