wading through clouds
my balloon high on pity
this footprint is staining our
heavenly city
inside is out and outside is in
(that blast was so loud
it made sparks out of him!)
the lights
I can’t bear
as I cut through the sea
turning left at the sun
I melt into me
Published by The Silver Poet
I AM a little spark in the sea of conscious awareness.
I am passionate about bringing the concept of freedom of expression into the forefront of our one mind and a keen awareness of personal power to the hearts of little children everywhere.
I exist to express!
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I loved this piece! Beautiful, energetic rhyme!
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Thanks! I wasn’t sure it would get much response being different to my usual work. 🙂
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Love that last line! As always the artwork is wonderful.
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thankyou! Thats my favourite drawing at the moment…
your elephant is on its way by the way x
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I enjoy your uses of rhyme and meter in this one–very kinetic!
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Thanks jennifer it was a bit unusual for me
🙂
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“Turning left at the sun … I melt into me”
Wow. So very beautiful.
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thankyou 🙂
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I like this style on you. Taking an old, worn out rhythm and making it clever, witty and…silvery new. Perfection. ❤
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Thankyou my swirly friend… all these S words came to mind then, svelte, slick, sweet, strong, special, starry
kiSSSSS
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Sent from my iPod
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Whoops! Apparently I did not reply in the right spot. 😉
S’cuse me. Definitely not svelte or slick.
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The last line is just super 🙂
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:-)))
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