my feet grip wind
pushing silver
blading through the air
and spiralling a curtain of liquid thought
a slick coating
of
perpetual motion
and now I am hanging
upside down
and the colour is dripping
my fingers touch earth
and so
I fertilise my story
and sigh deep into the depths of dark wheat
contained in this body
of Ā abrasive action
and
spinning light
Poet. You rock.
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well YOU make me smile
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Marvelousness on a mandolins
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I made a painting of a girl playing a mandolin the other day… maybe there is a poem there Leroy!
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Rather….marvelousness on a mandolinx
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or amanda the Lynx marvellously masters the mandolin š
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probably what the dervish experiences maybe even sancho panza
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i’ll look up Sancho Panza
I think the dervish is experiencing something that transcends the flailing confusion in my poem! BUT having said that the thing I’m striving to understand and possibly convey might be what the dervish experiences…
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great
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thanks!
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Pure awesomeness! š
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thankYOU
must be awesomeness reflected š
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sigh deep into the depths of dark wheat…..that’s a great line and nicely done overall.
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thanks!
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