herein lies a
conceptual
emotional
winding
a woollen complexity
rough on the tongue
dry in the throat
a faux love
a preternatural writhing
a knocking on the inner skull with hammers
little god diggers
and
gold wishers
driving within to my without
taking aim
hmmm
it doesn’t take a brain surgeon
to see
that the only solution
here
is hot tea and toast
Fabulous, especially those last lines, too superb! Cheers!
Autumn Jade
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Thankyou š
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Amazing =)
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thankyou x
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The last line threw me š
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haha yes It was an unusual solution to the my internal battles…but I have to say the best one so far!
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very cool. i had to look at the rendering for awhile to figure out what it is – pop! Then I saw it:) Lovely.
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š big smiles!
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Poet, you got such rhythm, I think in the end that’s why I love your stuff, it’s compulsive reading right to the end when a lot of poetry on blogs I just skim. Yours I read, because it keeps the eyes and the brain and the heart moving. I wish you well with your hot tea and toast; myself, I am going for another home-brewed cappuccino.
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thankyou
I need to avoid the home brew š
too many gives me a furry tongue (but o how i love the bitter hot nip)
which is also a symptom of my underlying disorder
depicted by that last poem of internal noise !
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I get the visual of all the external things that drag you through the day. And all of those annoyances that rub you the wrong way. So your respite is a cup of Earl grey and Rye. I Like it!
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oh yes earl grey and rye, how did you know? that is my favourite combination!
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If i was going to escape to tea nd toast, that would be my vice. Roght on!
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!!!
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Right on!
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right on!
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š
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Always so intriguing the mixture of your art and poetry…love it.
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Thankyou very much, I am finding less time for my poetry due to the art taking up bigger pieces of my daily pie… but every now and the one slips out
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Wonderful words, creativity and perfect ending! š
Lauren
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And a hug from a Canadian? š
God diggers…heh. Brilliant.
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Always receptive to a canadian hug!
that would be even better than toast i reckon
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Make mine coffee & toast & you’ve got a date…
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š
depends what time of day I’m having this mind struggle!
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